Osu Admissions Essay Template

Fisher MBA Essay Sample 1

Every year Fisher College’s MBA program admits a select group of talented professionals with demonstrated potential to become successful business leaders in an increasingly competitive, global environment. Briefly summarize your professional accomplishments to date. If you have not held a full-time job or are still in college, let us know about your leadership accomplishments in a school, internship, or extracurricular context.

Also, why do you want to earn an MBA degree in general and a Fisher College MBA in particular? Include your post-MBA goals, both short-term and long-term and outline your plan for achieving them.


Early – on in my career, I realized my passion for developing businesses and swiftly identifying and capturing untapped new business/market opportunities. Starting my career in Insurance Underwriting that included Risk Management, Proposal Writing and Pricing of Insurance products, I moved over to Banking to increase my knowledge of banking products. I thus advised Small & Medium Enterprises (SMEs) on complex financing issues – offering a Single Point Solution for their needs. Growth from functional (client relations) to zonal business responsibilities followed as turnaround objectives were achieved – often quicker and more profitable than expected. And I was steadily promoted to the next level of challenges and increased strategic and leadership responsibilities.  Read More of this career strategy MBA essay

Fisher MBA Essay Sample 2

Essay On Integrity

Hailing from a financial services background, much of my success and long-term customer relationships have been made possible due to my adherence to integrity. I consider it from two, related perspectives: Firstly, the integrity as we normally know as the act and character of being honest to all those who rely on us. Secondly, and at a more sublime level, is the integrity to one’s word and when “word and deed have not parted company” (Ms. ABC, an influential German-Jewish Political Theorist). Read More of this MBA Essay On Integrity

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Give meaning to your personal experiences by describing what qualities and skills you gained or implemented because of particular experiences.

Captivate, characterize and convince. Whether you are applying for graduate school, scholarships or a specific major, those are the three main tasks you should accomplish in your personal statement.

Captivate your reader with an enticing storyline; characterize your identity and unique qualities; convince the audience of your strengths by using specific examples.

Crafting a persuasive personal statement requires creativity and attentive revisions, but by following the advice below, your story can make you a diamond amongst stones.

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Define who you are

Using a small number of words, you must answer this question: Why should the application committee be interested in you? Give meaning to your personal experiences by describing what qualities (integrity, compassion, perseverance) and skills (leadership, communication, analytical) you gained or implemented because of those experiences.

Use a personal thesis — your individual philosophy or values — as a guiding thread throughout your essay. Reflect on what is important to you.

Here are some other ideas to help you brainstorm:

• What unique traits, skills or experiences do you possess?
• Explain your short- and long-term goals. What have you done and what will you do to work toward those goals?
• Describe any obstacles that you have overcome (concerning family, finances, academics, disability).
• Professional experiences including work and internships.
• On-campus involvement including classes, clubs, events, volunteering, leadership and teamwork.
• Life experiences including interactions or conversations you’ve had with others that have changed or influence you.
• Why will studying this major, attending this program or receiving this scholarship make you better person/leader/student?

Use clear organization and smooth transitions

Make an outline before you start writing and after you finish your first draft. Below is a sample outline. Keep in mind that there are many possible variations.

• Hook: interesting experience that created or deepened your interest in your field of study
• Short and long-term goals
• Specific example of an internship experience (and what it demonstrates about your personality and your interest the field)
• Specific example of an on-campus organization experience
(and what it demonstrates about your personality and your interest the field)
• If applying to graduate school: specific details about your interest in the program (Do your research and find reasons why you’re attracted to the program; don’t brown nose by showering their program with compliments — show how it matches your interests)
• Purposeful conclusion
• Graduate or major program: state how you are a good match for their program and how your attendance will benefit their program
• Scholarships: state how you will use or benefit from this scholarship money


• Be passionate: “What have you learned about the field and yourself that reinforced your conviction that you’re well suited for this field?” (Some advice fromPurdue OWL.)
• Value quality over quantity: Your personal statement should not be a list of accomplishments or a recitation of your resume. Choose a few specific examples that demonstrate the qualities you want to convey.
• Tell a story: An example of an intriguing personal narrative comes from Vince Gotera of the University of Northern Iowa.
• Use words from the prompt: Background, goals, ambitions and so on. Your readers will be looking for these key words.
• Be sincere and confident, but don’t exaggerate or brag: “Choose me because I’m better than everyone else” is not a commendable description. Emphasize what makes you special and believe what you say.
• Let someone else read it: Visit your university writing center and ask friends, family or professors to provide feedback on your essay.


• Never complain or make excuses.
• Do not list high school achievements (unless you are a freshman).
• Avoid controversial topics, including religion and politics.
• Avoid cliches.
• Avoid using quotes: You only have a limited amount of words to express who you are; why would the committee want to read someone else’s words? Instead, restate the value that your favorite quote embodies in your own words, and add your own personal twist.

End with a powerful conclusion

Your conclusion functions as a bookend to the introduction, so try to incorporate elements from your personal thesis. Transition gracefully into your final statements, and end memorably with an emotional impact. Captivate, characterize and convince.

Diane Kollman is one of Uloop’s Student Writers from Ohio State University. For more college news, interviews and advice, check out Uloop.com.

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